INTRODUCTION: WHAT Is A CRITIQUE? The words criric. criticism, criric(I/, criterion, and critique all come down 10 us from a family of words in Greek that refer to judging. distin­ guishing, and selecting. While art professocsoften - the critique purely as a place for constructive evaluation. to many art students. the critique is synonymous with judgment day.Tn,e to its Greek origins, the critique is seen as the place of reckoning, where the classroom authority blesses or disparages an object in which 1he student has become personally invested. The professor's job is to give useful criticism. to deconstruct the object and evaluate its parts with an eye to offering the student prac­ tical solutions to perceived deficiencies. The student's role is to distance himself enough from the work so that he can constructively participate in its demise.Thisdichotomy of the evaluative and the judgmental, already inherent in the critique's linguistic history, seL up the predetermined conflict that is played out in the formal art school critique. This ri1ual, which occurs in the artificial setting of a classroom art studio, among students and art faculty. often becomes an end in itself, a goal toward "'hich each student' production is aimed. But the critique is not a singular goal or deadline. Rather, it is one of many. part of a series of cadences that partition the semester into sections of creative productivity. Thus, the critique is both a deadline and a marker of a per­ petual beginning, a freeze-frame moment in the context of a continuous stud.io practice. In a sense, this is curried beyond art school into profes­ sional practice when the critique i replaced by the curator's studio visit (another ritual of judgment and selection), the subsequent exhibition. and finally the press review. The idea that the critique i, really a small marker in the larger con­ tinuity of an urtis1's practice allows l>oth student and teacher to think of it as a useful tracking device rather than as a courtroom drama. It becomes a kind of cross-sectionnl look at an ongoing activity rather than a place where items are ranked. This favors process over product. the means over the end, and arguably a belief in a ncce;,sary fluidity between the art.isl, the creative ac1, and the possibilities of a particular final product. ix x lmroductio11: \Viral I.< a Critique? Nevertheless, as useful as it is to frame ii as such. the critique has traditionally operated as a proceeding. where work (and perhaps stu­ dent) is judged within the often subjective parameters derived from a professor's own art school experiences, aesthetic principles. and even taste. This becomes easy 10 see in incermediate and advanced scudio classes when several professors (or ocher arc professionals) focus on a single work and begin 10 offer vastly different assessments. While this can be confusing 10 studencs, it at lease sends the healthy message chat Che interpretation of arc is subjective, and 1ha1 often winners and losers alike do 001 necessarily deserve eicher the censure or !he praise they receive. lodeed. lhe cri1eria themselves are fluid and comextualized wichin a hiscorical and current network of conversations about art that occur between the works themselves and the critical voices that sur­ round them. Kendall 8uster and Paulo Crowford The Critique Handbook The Art Student's Sourcebook and Survival Guide wz 0 z 0 I- w Cl) C: 0.,, ::, 0 (&I .c: bO C: E L&.. Chapter One FORMAL MATTERS FORM AND CONTENT When a group of students walks into a critique, first reactions will vary. Some \Ludents will initially examine Lhe works of art by looking for narrative contenc. They will ask,"What story does this image tell? What does that object make me think about when I sec it?" Others will try to assess a work through almost unconscious immediate reactions: "How does Lhai painting makeme feel?" These seemingly natural responses are in fact Lhe direct result of the way a work is put together-the formal operations of a work. Formal choices can suppon or undennine narratives, hideor foreground the mechanics and materiality of a work. empha ize or ignore its relation 10 history, and, in general. guide a viewer's reception of the wort. And so we begin with formal rna11ers and with the related terms fom,and content. We are tempted to think of form simply as a container Lhat holds conrem. But there is slippage berween the two terms. Form not only refers 10 the material delivery ponion of a work. as in Lhe physical form of a sculpture, but ir also refers 10 a set of visual elements (formal elemenrs). such as scale. shape, siu, composition. and color, whose relationships become the form and srructure of a work. One way of looking at the form/content relationship is to visualize a line with form a1one end and content al the other, and 10 imagineany given work of an as being located somewhere along that continuum. ln some works. we immedia1ely see form, and content follows. A monochromatic red painting or a large organic mass of clay will be read first as color or mass. In other works, where the message praclically shouts, we are con­ scious of the formal elements only larer, as in a Renaissance crucifixion painring or a sculpture !bar depicts a group of dead soldiers. l.ocllted beiween these are works in which form and materials are foreground d,1 sometimes tosuppon nnd sometimes 10 undem1ine a narrarive message. 3 4 Chapter One What you see is not always wha1 you get, though. lf a red mono­ chrome painting is titled Untitled Pai111i118 #3 or Red Recra11gle, you will likely see the painting as a fonnalist. sclf-rcferen1ial work tha1 we could placeon theji.m11end ofourfonn/contcnt continuum. Bue wha1if you were to learn that the red monochrome painting is titled After the Massacre? How would that affect your e periencc of it? Would the red suddenly becomae symbol ofblood? lf you were then to learn that the red pain1 was really the blood of the artist. would you again see the picture differently? This isall panof the slippage tha1occun. between form and contenL lrnaginea grouping of stones armnged in a circle on a gallery Door. They have been neitherca1"ed norcu1. •mpl) arranged on thefloor. Now also imaginea stone carved to look exactly like a boy holdinga stone in his hand, which he is abou1 to throw. The stones arranged ina circle, although embodying an abstract geomellic form, slill maintain their iden­ tity as stones. Indeed, their stoneness i an imponan1 component of the image. In the case of the carved slatue, ionc i. a raw material, which has been transformed into sornethi ng ocher chan itself. Here, physical form servesa narrative content. And even where the stone material is trans­ formed into the stone, held by che boy, ii reads as a represemation of stone, rather than a real stone found by thesideof Ll1e road. ln critique, we will likely talk abouc the uccuracy of the proponions of tbe stone ligure, how it looks from various van1age points, and the artist's technical ma tery over the material. In other words, we will eval­ uate the carved figure a5 mimetic2 image. and make judgmenis based on how well the fom1al elements imilate Life and chus how successfuUy the artist transfom1ed the materials into a likeness, which functions asa na"ative. The narrative is the story we imagine around a boy about 10 throwa stone. Depending on formal choices made by the artist, we might imaginean angry protesteror a child skipp1ng rocks bya creek. But when we come to the arranged \tone,,, we will discuss their positioning in relation 10 each other and 10 the space, what ldnd they are, what size, theshineof theirsurface.5, and their relation togravity. Any dis­ cussion ofnarrative meaning becomes secondary: anexercise in decoding thefonnal elemenis in a search formeaning. And even if the way they are fom1ally presented suggests a primitive ritual or evokes a memorial, they also might be read as fonnal-thac is, empty of any narrative meaning­ such that the experience of them is largely derived from the relations of thefonns toone another and to thespace chey occupy. In both cases, we are assessing the works formally, but the ques­ tions change in relation to whether the muterials keep their identity or Formal Matters s are transformed into narrative image. Thus, when we ialk about fonn, we are talking both about whal is materially in front of us and about ideals of structure and design that exist outsideof the work. ln the cru.e of the carved figure, the ideal is the human fom1 and the ways that we have seen it represented in an before, as well as a complex sy,tem for creating a likeness that also conforms to an array of abstract ,deus about things such as symmetry, balance. proportion, weight, and so on. ln the ease of the circle of stones. the ideal is perfect geometry, the essence and identity of the material. and the formal oper­ ations of the stones in space. Contml, in a sense, is that which is upressed or made manifest through form, or even as form. Al the utreme end of this-especially within the traditions of abstraction-form actually is content and vice versa. An untitled black square painting, for instance. can be seen as a complcle conllntion of form and content. What it depicts and what it is are indistinguishable. Overemphasizing formal concerns in the critique of a work that has a compelling message may seem absurd, as does looking for complex narratives in a black square. These are thefar ends of the continuum. But for now let us take a risk and exclusively consider fom1al matters on their own terms! Defining Form For the sake of convenience, we'll define form as the means by whiclt one give., sub.1tat1ce to an idea. Fonn operates in ways that are as numerous as there are formats for work. 1t·s easy to see form in scu.Lpturc, which has obvious weight. density. mass. propoltion. and three-dunen\lonal shape. ln two-limensiooal works, form is apparent in compos11ion, texture, palene, and line quality. But formal matters are also in operation in the length of a performance or video project, in the way a site-responsive installation is positioned in a specific place, or even in the volume of a sound work. Adding LO the com­ plexity of the discussion are the porous boundaries between media and the tendency for most contemporary studio practices 10 cross over into other disciplines. A three-dimensional fonn might feature a two-dimensional pattem on its surface. A canvas might becomea photograph by the useof liquid light or be a construction that comes off the wall. Acomplex ins1u1Ja1io11 might be constructed with elements that combine sound, video, built 6 Chapter One structures, and silk-screened panels. Critiquing this endless array of fonnal and material possibilities can be overwhelming, to say the least. So what do we mean when wesay that we wa11110 consider a work formally, and how does this operate in critique? A critique that begins by examining how fonnal elements support or undermine a work might sound something like this: ;'The story that you present in this scene is interesting, but your figures are badly drawn." ..1 am interested in the subject of your photographs, but I am bothered by the poor print quality, and the scale of the prints is all wrong." "Your installation of letters from war refugees conveys compassion and you present them without any hint of a patronizing attitude or voyeurism, but I believe that you could have been more inventive with the way the images are displayed." Yet again, the complaint might be that a well-executed drawing or a perfectly modeled sculpture feels so academic that it does not move us. First responses might be something like, "It is very well drawn but it leaves me cold. Do you even know what this is about or why you drew it in the first place?"This might lead to a discussion of possible visual devices that could be used,even at the sacrifice of accuracy, for thesake of composition or expressive content of some kind. What if a work's form and content cannot be distinguished, as when formal choices are strictly guided by the inherent qualities of an artist's materials, or when qualities such as shape, color, and spatial rela­ tions operate with such primacy thac these actually become the content of that work? In other words, how do we look at an that is nonreferentialor truly self-referential? This leads us to consider the terms formalism and modernism, whose ideas and traditions still inform much of what goes on both in art studios and in critique rooms. It is worth looking, then, at what is meant by these terms and some of the ideas surrounding them. Looking More Closely at Form Formalism and Modernism Even though all works of art have formal qualities and clearly arefonns of some kind, not all works are thought to be formalist. Formalist works tend to be intentionally limited to, or highly focused on. their formal elements, such as, shape, color, and materiality. The term formalism, which shares the same etymological root as form, refers to an approach to art and art making that emphasizes these elements. often seeing the work of an as a self-referential object as opposed to a vessel for a message of some kind. Formal Maners 7 Formalism has been criticized, by artists and critics alike, because of its penchant for being self-referential.The disdainful remark, "This work is just formalist." coming from a figurative paint.er. is an accusation that the work is Jacking in narrative substance. As one original member of the NewYork Ten3 put it, speaking about Rothko in the old days, "We all thought he was just doing tasteful paintings about nothing!" Whatever your view, it is still useful to examine a work by looking carefully at its formal elements, whether they are pointing to a narrative content or simply pointing to themselves. All works b.ave formal qualities. Consider how the gesture of a hrushstroke can suggest strUggle in a painting, whether U1e image is an expressionisticabstract composition or a bound figure; how the delicate transparent layering of a brushmark-free paint handling might allow for a seamlessness of surface, whether that surface is a milky white color field with gradual tonal shifts or a window into a realist painter's imag• inary world; how a filmmaker might assault our complaceney with a fast-paced montage and jarring soundtrack, or seduce us with muted palettes and soft fades. Whether you are looking at a painting of a dog by a pond or an abstract field of color, from this perspective, it is the formal qualitiesof the work that produce an aesthetic experience for the viewer. Thus, formal matters matter. For formalists, it is U1e most important aspect of a work. If we accept the formalist proposition that the aesthetic value of a work of art lies in its formal qualicies, then any given medium is best judged by iL5 trumess to the formal qualities inherent to it. Tb.is means that a work produced in a given medium might evolve toward a more and more rarified articulation of itSformal particulars. And a work of art could even ultimately be just about its formal qualities. Following this logic, works of art become disconnected from representation and increasingly abstr.icted to the point of becoming entirely self-referential. In other words, a work of art no longer represe11ts something out in the world but presents itself. The most successful works are those made according to the natural inclinations of the medium out of which they are constructed. Formalism and Modernism go hand in hand. Modernist thinking about arL is predicated on che assumption that art history is a progressive movement toward greater purity in each medium. A painting is judged not by what is happening in an imagined space beneath the surface but as a tltillg, essentially flat and made of physical paint. A sculpture is about space. volume. balance, modeling, materiality, and possibly color. 8 Chapter One The idea is that the raw material the artist uses ha, inclinations of it own, an essence, if you will. It is what it is. The transformation by the artist of the maierial into something other than itself becomes a trnns­ fonnation from something honest to wmething dishonest. 'The rock no longer looks hke a rock. The artist's craft was so good that now when I look at it I see a boy. TI1e mckness of it has been subjugated for the sake of a narrative image.The viewer has been deceived. One critic associated with this strain of thinking is Clement Greenberg.4 For Greenberg, competence in each an discipline comet with the unique nature of its medium. Standards of quality are found through purity of the form. nnd purity occurs through self-definition. What had been for the Old Masters limitations 10 be overcome-the Oat surface, the shape of the suppon, the natural properties of pigments-became to Modernist painters the essential qualities of the medium 10 beembraced. Abstracting and Abstraction In critique, the tcnns abstra('t and abstraction are often lhrown around and applied toa range of work> from d1s1oned drawings of the figure to sculptures fonned from steel tnangles. The tem1abs1ractio11, often replaced by terms such as11onrepreseJl/atio11al or nonobjective. is used to describe forms that don·1 resemble the real world. But its root. the Latin verb abstraltere, from which the English word '·abstmetion" is derived. literally means "to pull" or "draw away." Thus, abstraction, in the purest sense. begins with realiry and draws ttway from it,revealing the underlying lines anti geometric hapes. tramforming a figure or potied plant intosomething hardly recognizable.What isimpor­ Ull1t to remember is that you can think about abS1roc1 a.,a \'erb (something !hat you do) that leadsall the way to pureabstraetion. In thesame way that we used a line to visualize form and content, think of representation and abstraction a.5 located on far ends of a line. If you stan on one cud of the line, with an image that looks just the way n camera liCCS it and then begin to abstract it intO lines and 1ory in which he was working. With this comment, the artist was revealing a problem, as hesaw ii, not just with represenu11ion but also with associatio11. The very idea of a sculpture (or painting) that resists "reminding oneof something else" is the essence of the self-referential work.a work that can only be assessed fonnally, and wherethecontent is its shape, color, material, weight, and arrangemenl of its parts in composition. ' There is an old joke about a psychiatrist who gives his patienat Ror;ehach test. As the therapist present card after card of inkblot abstract shapes. the patient insists over and over again thnt what he sees are images with explicit sexual content. When the doctor reports that this indicates a dangerous obsession, the patient replies, "But doctor. you are the one with all those dirty picture,!" For many studentS, there is still a tendency to approach nonrepre­ sentational work by first trying to create associations. What does this sh11pe remind meof?That abstract shape looks like a duck or is it a fist? I seea head.The poc;sibilitics are limited only by the number of partici­ pants willing to play the Rorschach game. Perhaps this comes from the long hiqory of an at the service of the mimetic (or imitative) function. Or maybe it says much about the power of even the most reductive fonns to evoke emotional reactions, about the mysterious ways in which our brains function. and about how we humans aresymbol-making creatures compelled to make meaning. The danger in making such free associations in critique is that they can lead to so many subjective opinions, and so many irreconcilable and divergent paths,!hat it becomes impossible to sustain a critical dialogue. The association game in cr11ique is like the childhood experience of 10 Chap1erOne discovering rabbits and dragons in cloud formations. It reminds me of this. It reminds me of that. Although useful, even imperative, to a complete examination of theexperience of a work, if taken too far,subjective associ­ ations can dissolve into a full breakdown of discipline. That said, associations occur and need to be recognized in cri­ tique. When looking at work with a formal eye, the shape of a form or the uprightness of a figure may embody a likeness, which becomes tbe "content" of a work. Here, form slips into content. A shape or form that doesn't really look like anything but that reminds us of other things adds those identities to it. This slippage of identity can be called the poe1ics of meaning. Thus, association is not necessarily a thing to be avoided either in making art or looking at art. Indeed, a play wilh the possibility of com­ plex associations in abstract forms or shapes can be a substantive part of many artistic practices. Realism ,·ersusAbstraction:A Real Issue? In critique, there is often much discussion about realism. Does the drawing "look" like the still life? Did the student manage to model the light in a way tl'.at clearly articulates the model's torso? Is the figure modeled accurately in clay or proportionally rendered in cast fiberglass? Does the wood or Styrofoam carving present an accurate representation of the object? Often, achieve­ ment is measured by a student's ability to make a drawing or painting that approaches the accuracy of a photograph. Jn sculpture, a figure that can be read as a real person in a room gets an enthusiastic response. Many students equate craft with the ability to imitate nature. The esteem associated with accurate rendering comes down to us through the history of painting, drawing, printmaking, and sculpture­ traditions that began in a prephotographic age. Jn these disciplines, accurately rendered human figures often operated a characters in narra­ tives.To function as effective oarr.itive, sculpted and painted images had to convincingly look and feel like real people, much the way a character in a Tolstoy novel is crafted with detailed physical attributes and a com­ plicated psyche. The three-dimensional figure, like its two-dimensional counterpart in a painting, operated in a pictorial manner like an actor in a scene. Realism was able to convey a readable story. It wa not about the marble or the bronze but, rather, the creation of characters and narrative, much the way a novel works. What Is Realism? It is worth considering how we define realism. Is it what we can see wilh lhe naked eye?Througb the Jens of a camera? Can Formal Matters 11 what wesee through a microscope or a telescope be considered realism? Vision as we know it is an interaction between a limited portion of the electromagnetic spectrum and our own perceptual apparatus. Does the fact that we can't see most of the electromagnetic spectrum make those portions of the spectrum any less real? Are the seemingly abstract shapes of the blobs under the microscope less real than a potted plant on a nearby table? Questions like these have been changing how artists have viewed "reality" since the early twentieth century. They have prompted some artists whose images may appear to be abstract to still think of themselves as realists. It is also interesting to consider how many contemporary realist painters work not from life but from photographs or even projections. Rather than observing real people and objects. where the eye and brain become translators from three-dimensional space onto tlat space, new realists often work from flat to flat. How important is the source? If David Hockney's recent theories are true and that some of our most revered ma ter painters used mirrors and lenses, does that alter how we think aboutcraft? Many portrait artists work from multiple photographs. Many painting students are more comfort2ble using photographs as a source than they are working from life. And yet, it you offer them an opaque projector. they feel that would be cheating. Self-portrait assignments are the staple of traditional figure and life classes. But self-portraits must either be done from a mirror or a photograph. Both of these methods require the artist to transfer a flat image on a tlat surface onto another tlat surface. What makes realism realistic in all of this? What gives ii the mystical aura of the magician's craft? Where does the craft reside? And how relevant is process to the integrity of a finished work? What about sophisticated mold-making techniques used to replicate a three-dimensional form, or computer soft­ ware and prototype equipment that can scan an object and carve a replica in a variety of materials? How do these differ from works mod­ eled through eye and hand? The sculptor Constantine Brancusi once said, "When you see a fish, you do not think of its scales. do you? You think of its speed, its floating, flashing body seen through water....If I made fins and eyes and scales, I would arrest its movement and hold you by a pat.tern, or a shape of reality. I want just the flash of its spirit."6 Rather than seeing the work as abstract because it doesnot resemble the way a fish looks to the human eye, Brancusi's realism resides in the way the fish is-alive and in motion. One can think of artists like Brancusi as expressing the 12 Chapter One object as a verb rather than a noun, that is, theswimming of a fish or the growing of a flower, rather than the traditional dead nature that the French term for still lifesuggests. Nevertheless, drawing from life, whether it be human figure or potted plant, remains a mainstay in most college art foundations curric­ ula. Figure modeling, though not the staple it once was in art schools and college art depru1menL . has in recent years enjoyed a resurgence, in part because of the figure's seemingly inexhaustible narrative potential. We s1ill have bodies and are surrounded by material objects. In !be context of a basic skill-building class, tbe s1udent's work in critique is usually judged by Ille accuracy of the reproduced figure to !be real-life model. A class with the shared goal of gaining technical proficiency in representing the figure will likely conduct a fonnal critique centered on how well a student has reproduced the model's complex form. The challenge in critique in a more advanced course with a wide range of artistic practices is to determine whelber this standard of verisimilitude or another standard is appropriate to the work. In other words, in looking at the work fonnally, we ask how critical it is to the success of the piece that these forms imitate reality. LOOKING AT A PAINTING FORMALLY What Makes a Painting a Painting? What makes a painting a painting? Faced wi1h the diversity of practices within the discourse of contemporary painting, is there a common language for discussing the many forms painting takes? Are there spe­ cific ingredients that a painting has to contain in order to be a painting? Does it have to hangon the wall? Contain pigment of some kind? Be on c,invas or board? Have a picture plane? Be rectangular? Be made with brushes? As you read this, you are probably thinking of many well­ known paintings !bat aren't made this way, that specifically lack at least one of theseelements. Are there particular elements that a painting must contain to hold onto its identity as painting? Can we talk about an acad­ emic figure painting in thesame way that we discuss a suitcase sprayed wilb l<.ryloo enamel? Or a raw canvas pinned to the wall in the way we talk about a color field painting? What about several piles of brightly colored dry pigment on the floor? Or dried latex applied and then removed from a canvas support and then laid out on the floor? Or a video image projected onto a framed canvas? Fonnal A1atters 13 Are disciplines converging in such a way that painting is at risk of continual slippage intosculpture. into photography, or into the digital art , video, or performance? Does paintingstill even havean identity of its own? Painting as Its Own Context Ever since painters lef1 the architectural frames of ca1hedrals and chapels 10 make transportable oil paintings on stretched canvases or wooden panels, they have tended to accept the four sides of a canvas as natural borders that frame a discrete pictorial space. The real world beyond tha1space is accepted as extraneous. Thus,1he white canvas is a built-in context for a painting, in that it houses, frrunes, and fom1s a dia­ logue with what it contains. In this sense, the white picture plane is to the painter what the gallery space around a sculpture is to the sculptor. Many painters-representational and abstract alike-have accepted the stretched canvas surface or primed board as a neutral ground on which to hang a painting. This view is based on an underlying assumption that a painting occurs on the surface of the canvas or board. The stretcher and the sidesof the support are functional necessities and remain, for all prac1ical purposes, invisible. While we are ignoring the physical aspect of a painting, we might also ask if there can be such a thing as a neutral or ideal picture plane that isn't associated with anything outsideof itself.What shape would it be? A rectangle placed horizontally suggests a landscape. Placed verti­ cally, it suggests a portrait. Even so, artists have consistently accepted 1he rectangular format as relatively neutral, conceding that any implicit meanings have been almost extricated by the pervasiveness of such paintings wilbin the tradition. A Painting's Internal Logic Beyond its relation to things outside of itself,such as its place in art his­ tory, where and how it is presented, or even the other works of art around it, we can speak of a painting as having an internal logic. When this frames our discussion we can begin our formal assessment by first asking a series of basic questions. How big is the work? What shape is it? How far from the wall is the surface? Are the edges painted or framed? Have the edges been ignored? Are the s1aples visible? Is it a stretched canvas, a board, a panel, or something else? ls the raw surface beneath the painted surface visible? Is it treated with white gesso or a transparent sizing? Has Ille surface been altered in some way, cut into, 14 Clwprer One sewn onto? Is the surface made out of paint. or is it some other nontra­ ditional painting material such as tar, beetroot, or shampoo? Is the paint thin, unifonn. or thick? Is it smooth or textured? Are the brushstrokes visibleor hidden? Do the brushstrokes present physical evidence of the ai1ist's gestures? What kind of gestures are they? ls there color, and what kind? Are the values close, or are there large contrasts of value? ls the painting high key or low key? What kinds of marks can be seen on the surface? Are they about line? What kinds of lines: are they thick, thin, or varied'/ Are they about gesture? Do they have a physical pres­ ence? Did the artist use brushes, and what size? Were a variety of brushes or other tools used'! Are there other elemenis: collage or found objccis? These questions all address actions going on withi11 rhe frame. Line Line is the most basic mark-a stick pulled through sand. a burnt ember scrawled across the wall of a cave, the tracks of a snail, or fine filamencs of a spider's web. Line is considered by many ai1ists to embody the direct channel between the brain and the hand, a means itself of thought. And line is content depending on what it is made of, the gesture that created it, and where it resides. A fast-moving, highly pressured line feels angry or aggressive. A thin wobbly line has a tcnla• tive message. Think of a large scrawled confident signature as opposed to a small hesitant one. What does it tell you about the signatory? Line can be ordered or chaotic, fast or slow, Lbick or thin. It can be the prod­ uct of an emotional outburst or a machine. It can make ilSelf almost invisible at the service of illusion or flaunt its identity as a mark on the page. Line also occupies and divides space and, thus, influences how one reads everything around it. Color Color is to painting what line is to drawing. Color carries with it emotional content. and the perception of it changes depending on the othercolors nearby. Indeed, color is an effect rather than a real propeny. While studenis learn the nuts and bolts of color theory in foundations courses, suffice to say that an analysis of color is integral to any formal critique of a painting. Is the painting high key or low key? Is the palette limited, or are there many seemingly unrelated colors? lf it is limited, how so? Were only eanh colors used, saturated colors, or a combination of the two? Is there an obvious logic to the color, such as the use of complements or triads? Does the painting have a temperature--hot reds and oranges, or cool blues and greens? Is the painting limited to analogous colors? Is it a monochrome? How are the colors distributed across the picture plane? Formal Matters 15 Is it a harmonic distribution; that is, has the anist considered color extension in relation to saturation within triadic or complementary rela­ tionships? Or is it unbalanced, thus creating an evocative or emotional space? All of these are fonnal elements and have a bearing on how we perceive a painting. Composition Composition is generally thought of as the arrangement of lines and shapes within a pictorial space. As withcolor, there are books on the rules and regulations of harmonious composition that have come down to us from the masters. These are usually covered in foundations courses and quickly forgotten. To many students, thinking about compo­ sition in tenns of triangles and the golden rule feels like being forced to learn a dead language that no one speaks anymore. Nevertheless, many c,ompositional traditions are based on shared human percept.ions. For instai1ce, a composition that forms an equilateral triangle centered in the picture plane feels stable as opposed to one formed from an isosceles triangle. whose longest side runs diagonally from the top right corner of the canvas to the bottom left.The one is static, the otherdynan1ic. A circle in the center of a picture plane, as in the Japanese flag, feels balanced, while one at the bottom edge feels pulled down by gravity. A large shape dominates a smaller one. As the number of marks or shapes on a picture plane increases, each one loses significance, much the way a child who is one of twelve has a smaller presence in a family compared to an only child. Or lhe general on a battlefield stands out against a mass of uni­ fonned soldiers. In critique, we analyze how the arrangement of shapes, lines, and fonns works on us. We also ask how this arrangement affects other fonnal elements and is affected by them. We can talk about compo­ sition in purely formal tenns. And we can also look at how it affecis the way we make meaning out of the painting. We will take this up again in the next chapter. Fields Fields in painting are like fields in nature. Imagine a field of green grass. Now evenly distribute purple flowers over the green grass field. Or let us envision a field of red, yellow, and white flowers popping up through a blanket of snow, or a scattering of white flowers coming up through snow. Picture the night sky on a dark night away from city lights, or the flecks of light on an expanse of ocean.These are all fields. Fields are composed as alJ-ovcr patterns across the picture plane. The composition operates not as juxtaposition, as in a painting of a scene or a figure, but as layering. Imagine a graph with an x and y axis. Fields can lay on the plane of the x and y axes, or can be layered. one over 16 Chapter One another, on the z axis. In painting, fields might be made of flung paint, carefully repeated motifs, buttons sewn to a canvas in a grid, a tangle of lines or brushstrokes, or a single color. Fields spread out to the edges of the canvas so that the pictorial space becomes a fragment of an imagi• nary larger field that exists beyond itsedges. A Painting's External Logic Whereas a painting occurs on the surface of a support, it also becomes a part of 1hat support. Thus, aparl from ils physical surface and the image Iha! occupies its surface, 1he painting is also an object. As an object, it occupies space io rela1ion to the other objects around ii. I1 stands away from the wall 10 a grea1er or lesser ex.lent. It has weight and volume. Formal choices that the painter makes can highlight or obscure a paiming's abjectness. If the painting's edges are thick, causing it tos1and away from the wall, itsabjectness isemphasized.The eye moves from thefrontal surface to the edges. The surface becomes part of a larger organized whole. The artist is now obligated 10 think about what the edges mean in relation to the surface of lhe canvas. Are 1hey an ex.tension of it? Does the image wrap around thes1retcher? Should theedges be painted as a continuation of the surface? Do the edges fonn anolher relaled sel of surfaces? And if theedges of lhe canvas areof a standard depth, is the artis1obliged 10deal with them?Some painters accept thestretched canvas asa neutral ground for painting. which !hey seeas occuning exclusively on the surface. Are they nolonger obliged 10 deal with theedges'? What does ii mean if the edges of1he canvas become holdersof 1he spillover from 1he painting process, or if they are covered with slaples lhal fasten the canvas 10 the stretcher bar? A paiming, with untouched edges and of a standard depth. gives the message thal painler and viewer agree thai the "world" is the surface of the painting. It is its own context. Does this become an active s1a1emen1 by 1he artist that the painting occurs exclusively on the surface? That she views thestrelcher as a neu• tral place to hanga painting? Thal she is not in1eres1ed in the painling as objec1? The moment a painter calls allention 10 the support, and the painling reverts lo being an object in space, the viewer looks not just at thesurface bu1aroc,nd it. A canvas can also be seen as a plane or membrane, and a ruplure in 1his membrane calls auention lo the painting as an objec1. The canvas can haveobjecls auached 10 ii or be punc1ured with cuts. These ac1ions undermine a seamless reading of its surface. When a painting begins 10 Fomral Ma11ers 17 foreground its identity as objecl rather than surface, ii starts to inleracl with the space that ii occupies. It becomes an object in space. The fore• grounding of the painting as object changes the reading of the surface, which is now in dialogue with ils own constructedness and identity as an object. Paintings may also showcase their relationship to the exhibition space. Shaped monochromes appear 10 be floming in the typically vasl, white wall space that comains them. In this case, the paintings lhem­ selves have become figures on a larger ground, that of 1he gallery wall. They operale primarily in relation to the wall space1ha1 contains them and secondarily as discrete painted surfaces. A group of shaped mono• chrome paintings by the artist Ellsworth Kelly, for instance. seems almost IO become a composilion of colored shapes on the picture plane of 1hegallery wall. Shape changes the dynamic as well. Once a painting shifls away from 1he space of the rec1angle (painting's mos1 neutral lerritory), it moves furlher toward the province of the object. Shaped canvas con­ structions, while still poinling primarily to themselves, also address 1he space1hey occupy by projecting in and out, no1only,on the x and y axes of the wall, but also on the z ax.is, which runs perpendicular 10 the plane of the wall from any given poim on the painting's surface. Edges The first edge is the physical ouleredge of a painting.This edge separates the work from 1he res1of Lhe world, marking off the world within the pictorial space. 11 establishes agreed-on borders that mark off the painting as a kind of autonomous terri1ory. The nex1 frame is made ou1of1he relation of theimage or worked area to the physical outer edge. Consider these edges within 1he frame. Are they negotiable? Was the painlingexecu1ed on canvas slapled 10a wall and then glued omoa larger surface? Whal if the artist painted all the way lo Lhe edges of a raw can• vas, causing the ou1er part of the image lo be wrapped around the edge, when the work is finally stre1ched? If the edges are painled over, in this case, the image becomes cropped. If the image isleft10 wrap around !he edge, what happens? Now the pictorial space has been expanded into lhree-dimensional space. What if a drawing was begun on a huge expanse of paper so that it could expand as needed? ln all of1hese cases, the artist has made compositional decisions based on a pic1orial space that nolonger exists. One way around !his is to begin a drawing or paint• ing by first marking off lhe edges of a piclorial space and work within that. Al thesame time. expanding and contracting the piclorial space can besolutions to composilional impasses and create surprising resulls. 18 Chapter One Edges alsoseparate discrete areas of color or shape within a paint­ ing.They are the transition from one space to another within the piclUre plane. Are the edges in the work in front of us so clean that they seem factory-made? Are they blurry to the extent that you cannot tell where one area begins and the next ends? Do they look like they were taped or scumbled. carefully painted or accidental? How the artist dealt with the interior edges is all part of the reading of a painting. &ale Scale weighs in, Joo. A large canvas tips inherently away from object toward pure surface because the depth of its edges is much smaller. The edges of a large painting are slight compared to itS surface area. It's hard to imagine holding it. It approaches the domain of archi­ tecture. Nevertheless, if we increase a painting'sdepth or let the painted surface extend over lhe edges, the work can shift toward object. The edges become foregrounded and cease to beneutral. Scale refers both to a work's size in relation 10 the world around it and to the relation of its parts to one another within the internal logic of the whole. The firstcould be called a work's absolute scale. The second, its relative scale. Large works seem powerful, authoritative, ambitious, and have a seductive potency by their magnitude alone. It is much like the difference between seeing a movie on the big screen, where the close-up shot of an actor's head is eight feet tall,compared to seeing the same shot on a small video screen. The one is larger than life--.i vast landscape-the other is pocket-sized. Note also how much less material movie screens are compared to televisions. which are themselves objects. Relat.ive scale can be thought of as the same kind of difference but operating instead within the picture plane itself. Imagine a scene of a small child, perhaps made to seem even smaller by a bird's-eye cam­ era angle. Onto the screen comes a towering bad guy.The relative scale of the two supports the narrative message that this child is weak and vulnerable in the face of a much greaterpower. In painting. a large work carries with it associations with the works of that scale that came before it. It seems museum size. Heroic. It already seems important. If it is larger than the viewer, it feels more like an environment or a wall than a picture. One has to stepaway from it in order to see it. A small work hasan intimacy about it. One must be close to it to see it. It seems to belong in a furnished room in an intimate set­ ting. It is an object that can easily be held. It's thesize of a lamp, or book, or small mirror. A small painting is naturally a window into an illusion. One feels the frame, even in the case of an unframed work. Fom,a/ Matters 19 Format Format refers to the shape and proportions of a pictorial sur­ face. As discussed earlier, most paintings are rectangular in format But many are not. Thus, if we are looking at a rectangular painting, we already know one of the following: Either the artist is accepting the rectangular format as a kind of neutral ground on which to paint (and this is precisely the right shape for what the artist has in mind) or he hasn't really thought about it. On the other hand, if we are presented with an odd-shaped canvas, or even a rectangle with extreme propor• tions, we know right off that the artist is considering the relation of the picture to the picture plane. For instance, an artist might choose an extremely long horizontal support on which to paint a landscape, thus emphasizing the horizon line and a sense of panoramic expanse and tranquility. A nonrectangular support immediately contextualizes a work among the many other works that have challenged the horizontal picture plane. A nontraditionally shaped support becomes a primary carrier of content that immediately assertS the painting's identity as object over its identity as painted surface. Painting as Image, Act, and Thing Mimesis and Improvisation In Book TVof the Poerics,1 a fifth-century B.C. handbook of sorts for playwrights, Aristotle talks about two natural instincts that motivate the writing of poetry. He argues that poetry sprang from two causes, each of them lying deep within human nature. The first was a natural instinct for imitation (mimesis) and the second. an instinct for harmony and rhythm, which through a kind of rude process of impro­ visation gave birth to poetry. One might easily place the Lineage of paint­ ing that comes down from the Renaissance in Aristotle's construct as operating from the first instinct, motivated wholly by the desire to imitate nature. The modernist painter, however,came to painting largely from the second instinct, as a kind of improviser.The part of poetry which is rhyme and rhythm, meterand movement, is much like those fonnal connections, which orchestrate the whole of a canvas, outsideof any referential mean­ ings. Where painting has relinquished its instinct for imitation, this second instinct has seemed to motivate and become the full content and experience of the work. Many figurative paintings operate in both arenas of activity. Although concerned with getting the figure right, the figurative painter may well improvise within the totality of forms. often sacrific­ ing accuracy for expressive distortion or pictorial integrity. To many 20 Chapi,rOne modernist and contemporary figurative painters. process cannot be detached from the final image. Surface, Gesture, and Process Early modernist painters abnndoned the traditional ide" Ll1at a painting had to be a seamless retinal image. Instead, they began to explore a p11inting's flat surface, turning it imo a kind of rcoord of itSowncreation. 1be painterly surfaoe, asa result, could be seen as a record of an act and the door was open for relocating the place of aesthetic meaning from the image itself to the activated surface, and ulti­ mately to the momenroftheaesthelicact.Wesee thisasearly asCeunne's layered patches of color and Van Gogh·s directional brushsltQkes. where the gestures of theartist's hand have been tied to the implied gesrures of a depicted natural landscape orobject. as perceived by the artist. We see this in American abstract expressio11ist painting where the act of painting is foregrounded to the extent that a painting's success or failure rested curiously on itsability toconvince the critic that the moment of ilscreation wasanauthentic one. In this way, theartist becomes integral to the equation. no longer <,eparated from the art objecL As a result. the artist's croft is asconcerned with the development and assertion of 1/te self as it is about the skill of mixing color or modeling light and shadow. When process drives u painter, 1he painting takes on u voice of its own asit be<:omes formed.11even begin. to have a say in the choices !hat culminate in its final form. In other words, the painter discovers what the painting is or will look like as she goes. Process is often self-driven by formal and material choices as they are made. The painter. tuned into an emerging structure of relauonships, gui andis guided tow:trd an elu• sive end. Thus, the painting is. in a sense, discovered lhrough the act of pninting. The skillor technique for making such a painting then becomes more about a frame of mind. and an ability tosee and respond, than about techniques for rendering accurate proportions or mixing color. In formal critique, we look at the painting asevidence of this process. Hesitation A student Pt and somecaUIJl'aphk black lines that $ecmed to loosety ttrucwre the picture plane. The ln.strua.or, who was a dte--hard abstract-exprenk:,nlst of the Califun¥a ,choo[.,t>Rltt!M there." The student blushe